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From Jan Lehnardt <...@apache.org>
Subject Re: CouchDB website: contributing redesign / text help
Date Tue, 12 May 2015 12:29:44 GMT

> On 12 May 2015, at 14:22, ermouth <ermouth@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> I left my suggestions here:
>> Here are my suggestions:
> 
> Collegues, if you have someone who is a) native English speaker, b) has
> skills in writing good copy – could you please ask him/her to review the
> source?

Good call, let’s see: https://twitter.com/janl/status/598102651222523904 :)

Best
Jan
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> 
> Both @Jan and @Alexander texts have good subtle moments – but they both are
> not enough good for landing, sorry. As well as my texts.
> 
> May be @Johs could help? His biz requires strong copy skills, so may be he
> has someone in-staff?
> 
>> "Help us" sounds like as we're in catastrophic position (:
> 
> I decided 2 cries are acceptable, 3 is too much )
> 
> ermouth

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