From dev-return-21984-apmail-couchdb-dev-archive=couchdb.apache.org@couchdb.apache.org Sun Apr 15 09:11:47 2012 Return-Path: X-Original-To: apmail-couchdb-dev-archive@www.apache.org Delivered-To: apmail-couchdb-dev-archive@www.apache.org Received: from mail.apache.org (hermes.apache.org [140.211.11.3]) by minotaur.apache.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 0933B9CC0 for ; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 09:11:46 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 78761 invoked by uid 500); 15 Apr 2012 09:11:46 -0000 Delivered-To: apmail-couchdb-dev-archive@couchdb.apache.org Received: (qmail 78681 invoked by uid 500); 15 Apr 2012 09:11:46 -0000 Mailing-List: contact dev-help@couchdb.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: dev@couchdb.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list dev@couchdb.apache.org Received: (qmail 78667 invoked by uid 99); 15 Apr 2012 09:11:46 -0000 Received: from athena.apache.org (HELO athena.apache.org) (140.211.11.136) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 09:11:46 +0000 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=-0.0 required=5.0 tests=RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,SPF_NEUTRAL X-Spam-Check-By: apache.org Received-SPF: neutral (athena.apache.org: local policy) Received: from [209.85.216.180] (HELO mail-qc0-f180.google.com) (209.85.216.180) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 09:11:40 +0000 Received: by qcmv28 with SMTP id v28so1124004qcm.11 for ; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 02:11:18 -0700 (PDT) X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :content-type:x-gm-message-state; bh=jvX85PojO0mWvdEm9Jqai1HvkqvA8bQYyvmbPXMHctc=; b=hN3t59Wa/RPFd2x2wTFFvWC4X9dmdkwgWAJGwcsEHuRlCBBdKMkRSkqHZACqna3IRJ AlsK0muyqtk/26JTQnI2UvhXCpRK0oOcB/5ne/HX3XkXg3y1d4ggyovQznBoWdjX+ruW i1rLKhtrRTszWPlLfrhP0MH5B8Q3+HZ5KZFVA4FKzr0J9SWojsoEKYxKqFz+wusAgZxY 6qLdCDRRzaFeXONHu+NIo+Z7CaHXDYpHykmSqptRH3S5OPvsmETKK+rQ7AVDy6eZQsVJ POK4rW632Zxtst8yfxxtN5Z979zInlxS/zkyqil09GIz7GfJ5/Rqj+vOPVDMJn56MRC0 V5XQ== MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.229.47.206 with SMTP id o14mr2041525qcf.16.1334481078401; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 02:11:18 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.224.215.70 with HTTP; Sun, 15 Apr 2012 02:11:18 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2012 21:11:18 +1200 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Wikipedia article cleanup From: Tim McNamara To: dev@couchdb.apache.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQkaJ/sAXeLfsKonZ041TT/uGd20bU1OZngSrKlXEjge/YyVoYLO4yuJSy1wSdwwdJXAjCOp X-Virus-Checked: Checked by ClamAV on apache.org On 15 April 2012 12:20, Tim McNamara wrote: > I've spent some time this morning, working on the introduction and > making from stylistic changes. I think the text is much more readable > now. Some support on more supportive matters would be welcome. s/supportive/substantive