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From mwbro...@apache.org
Subject [4/8] docs commit: [CB-3962] started removing we/let's, but there are too many for now
Date Tue, 16 Jul 2013 21:20:55 GMT
[CB-3962] started removing we/let's, but there are too many for now


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/commit/a6d123a2
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/tree/a6d123a2
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/diff/a6d123a2

Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: a6d123a288656f30bb6e9b9b1a3a672a569a4f46
Parents: b624d4e
Author: Mike Sierra <letmespellitoutforyou@gmail.com>
Authored: Tue Jul 16 10:18:25 2013 -0400
Committer: Michael Brooks <michael@michaelbrooks.ca>
Committed: Tue Jul 16 14:15:56 2013 -0700

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 STYLESHEET.md                                  |  4 ++--
 docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md | 10 +++++-----
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/a6d123a2/STYLESHEET.md
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diff --git a/STYLESHEET.md b/STYLESHEET.md
index e77e02d..cb4667b 100644
--- a/STYLESHEET.md
+++ b/STYLESHEET.md
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ editorial guidelines.
 * Do not start a sentence with a lowercase member name.
 
 * Do not refer to "I," the author of the documentation, as in "What I
-  am going to show you now." Likewise avoid "we," as in "We see
-  that..."
+  am going to show you now." Likewise avoid "we" and "let's," so
+  instead of "We see that..." try "Note that..."
 
 * OK to refer to "you," the developer, but only if necessary, e.g., to
   avoid passive voice.

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/a6d123a2/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
index 39a79d7..dba4f2d 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ by Cordova.
 
 ## Writing an Android Java Plugin
 
-We have JavaScript to fire off a plugin request to the native side. We
-have the Android Java plugin mapped properly via the `config.xml` file.
-So what does the final Android Java Plugin class look like?
+JavaScript fires off a plugin request to the native side.  The Android
+Java plugin is mapped properly via the `config.xml` file.  So what
+does the final Android Java Plugin class look like?
 
 What gets dispatched to the plugin via JavaScript's `exec` function gets
 passed into the Plugin class's `execute` method. Most `execute`
@@ -116,11 +116,11 @@ If you do not need to run on the UI thread, but do not want to block
the WebCore
 
 ### Echo Android Plugin Example
 
-We would add the following to our config.xml:
+Add the following to our `config.xml` file:
 
     <plugin name="Echo" value="org.apache.cordova.plugin.Echo" />
 
-Then we would add the following file to
+Then add the following file to
 `src/org/apache/cordova/plugin/Echo.java` inside our Cordova-Android
 application:
 


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