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From d...@cocoon.apache.org
Subject [Cocoon Wiki] Updated: ApacheConAboutUs
Date Mon, 08 Nov 2004 19:48:10 GMT
   Date: 2004-11-08T11:48:10
   Editor: JeremyQuinn <jeremy@apache.org>
   Wiki: Cocoon Wiki
   Page: ApacheConAboutUs
   URL: http://wiki.apache.org/cocoon/ApacheConAboutUs

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@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 
 == The community ==
 
-People say the Cocoon community has a strong sense of
+People say that Cocoon has a strong sense of
 community spirit. Members of this community are collectively
-working together creating great software in a creative and
+working together writing great software in a creative and
 effective manner.
 
-But even more over the time the community has grown in some
+But even more, over time the community has grown in some
 social aspects that can be felt on gatherings like the yearly
-GetTogether. (held in Ghent, Belgium at the beginning
+GetTogether. (Held in Ghent, Belgium at the beginning
 of October). In 2004 this event brought together more than 130
 people from 17 countries to talk about and work on Cocoon during
 a very successful hackathon and conference.
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 to be created efficiently and in a very flexible way.
 
 Innovation and integration are substantial goals of this project.
-With the latest versions stability has become another one.
+With the latest versions, stability has become another one.
 
 == The software ==
 

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