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From shan...@apache.org
Subject cvs commit: xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts databases.xml
Date Fri, 07 Jun 2002 21:10:52 GMT
shannon     2002/06/07 14:10:52

  Modified:    src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts databases.xml
  Log:
  Previous commit was premature.
  This commit clarifies the language.
  Some edits.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.2       +9 -9      xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts/databases.xml
  
  Index: databases.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvs/xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/userdocs/concepts/databases.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- databases.xml	28 Apr 2002 18:11:12 -0000	1.1
  +++ databases.xml	7 Jun 2002 21:10:52 -0000	1.2
  @@ -16,13 +16,13 @@
   	  <p>
   		Publishing dynamic content or creating web-applications at
   		some point often involves database access. Apache Cocoon
  -		offers a number of different facilities to access databases,
  -		(object) relational and XML. This document aims to give an
  -		overview over the different choices to access (object)
  +		offers a number of different facilities to access
  +		(object) relational and XML databases. This document provides
  +		an overview of the different ways to access (object)
   		relational databases.
   	  </p>
   	  <p>
  -		This document will not explain how to setup database
  +		This document will not explain how to set up database
   		connectivity with Apache Cocoon. For this, see <link
   		  href="../../developing/datasources.html">here.</link>
   	  </p>
  @@ -37,14 +37,14 @@
   
   	<s1 title="Actions">
   	  <p>
  -		<link href="actions.html">Actions</link> are code that is executed
  -		during pipeline setup and its outcome can change how the pipeline is
  -		assembled. This way a pipeline can for example contain an alternative
  +		<link href="actions.html">Actions</link> are code to be executed
  +		during pipeline setup. The outcome of an action can change how the pipeline is
  +		assembled. For exampl, a pipeline may produce an alternative
   		page to display when a database operation failed.
   	  </p>
   	  <p>
  -		Actions are especially great to insert, change, or delete data. By
  -		using the pipeline switching feature of actions, pages can be simpler
  +		Actions are especially great for inserting, changing, or deleting data. 
  +		When pipeline switching features of actions are used, pages can be simpler
   		as they are only concerned with one view - either successful operation
   		or failure.
   	  </p>
  
  
  

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