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From Chip Childers <chip.child...@sungard.com>
Subject Re: REVISED (was Re: Talking Points for Graduation)
Date Thu, 21 Mar 2013 16:43:57 GMT
On Thu, Mar 21, 2013 at 04:38:37PM +0000, Sally Khudairi wrote:
> Ack + thanks. You caught a good one. I'll add the "with".
> 
> Marketing/PMC-folk: I presume you're OK with the addition as well?

Yup

> 
> -Sally
>  
> 
> 
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Kelceydamage@bbits" <kelcey@bbits.ca>
> > To: "marketing@cloudstack.apache.org" <marketing@cloudstack.apache.org>
> > Cc: Joe Brockmeier <jzb@zonker.net>; Chip Childers <chip.childers@sungard.com>;
"cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org" <cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org>;
Sally Khudairi <sk@apache.org>; "press@apache.org" <press@apache.org>
> > Sent: Thursday, 21 March 2013, 12:35
> > Subject: Re: REVISED (was Re: Talking Points for Graduation)
> > 
> > I can't help but feel this is grammatically incorrect:
> > 
> > "It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning 
> > production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed 
> > environments."
> > 
> > Pretty certain it's missing a "with", as in "underpinning 
> > production clouds with...."
> > 
> > Thanks
> > 
> > Sent from my iPhone
> > 
> > On Mar 21, 2013, at 9:07 AM, Sally Khudairi <sallykhudairi@yahoo.com> 
> > wrote:
> > 
> >>  It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning 
> > production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed 
> > environments.
> >
> 

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