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From Sally Khudairi <sallykhuda...@yahoo.com>
Subject Re: REVISED (was Re: Talking Points for Graduation)
Date Thu, 21 Mar 2013 16:38:37 GMT
Ack + thanks. You caught a good one. I'll add the "with".

Marketing/PMC-folk: I presume you're OK with the addition as well?

-Sally
 



----- Original Message -----
> From: "Kelceydamage@bbits" <kelcey@bbits.ca>
> To: "marketing@cloudstack.apache.org" <marketing@cloudstack.apache.org>
> Cc: Joe Brockmeier <jzb@zonker.net>; Chip Childers <chip.childers@sungard.com>;
"cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org" <cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org>;
Sally Khudairi <sk@apache.org>; "press@apache.org" <press@apache.org>
> Sent: Thursday, 21 March 2013, 12:35
> Subject: Re: REVISED (was Re: Talking Points for Graduation)
> 
> I can't help but feel this is grammatically incorrect:
> 
> "It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning 
> production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed 
> environments."
> 
> Pretty certain it's missing a "with", as in "underpinning 
> production clouds with...."
> 
> Thanks
> 
> Sent from my iPhone
> 
> On Mar 21, 2013, at 9:07 AM, Sally Khudairi <sallykhudairi@yahoo.com> 
> wrote:
> 
>>  It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning 
> production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed 
> environments.
> 

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