Return-Path: X-Original-To: apmail-cloudstack-dev-archive@www.apache.org Delivered-To: apmail-cloudstack-dev-archive@www.apache.org Received: from mail.apache.org (hermes.apache.org [140.211.11.3]) by minotaur.apache.org (Postfix) with SMTP id B2287F686 for ; Wed, 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 77068 invoked by uid 500); 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 -0000 Delivered-To: apmail-cloudstack-dev-archive@cloudstack.apache.org Received: (qmail 77009 invoked by uid 500); 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 -0000 Mailing-List: contact dev-help@cloudstack.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: dev@cloudstack.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list dev@cloudstack.apache.org Received: (qmail 76999 invoked by uid 500); 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 -0000 Delivered-To: apmail-incubator-cloudstack-dev@incubator.apache.org Received: (qmail 76987 invoked by uid 99); 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 -0000 Received: from reviews-vm.apache.org (HELO reviews.apache.org) (140.211.11.40) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Wed, 10 Apr 2013 16:30:11 +0000 Received: from reviews.apache.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by reviews.apache.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F065B1C805E; Wed, 10 Apr 2013 16:30:08 +0000 (UTC) Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="===============2581702084412887977==" MIME-Version: 1.0 Subject: Re: Review Request: Documentation changes for VMware dvSwitch and Nexus dvSwitch From: "Radhika PC" To: "David Nalley" , "Jessica Tomechak" , "Sateesh Chodapuneedi" , "ilya musayev" , "Chip Childers" , "Pranav Saxena" Cc: "cloudstack" , "Radhika PC" Date: Wed, 10 Apr 2013 16:30:08 -0000 Message-ID: <20130410163008.13837.73294@reviews.apache.org> X-ReviewBoard-URL: https://reviews.apache.org Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Sender: "Radhika PC" X-ReviewGroup: cloudstack X-ReviewRequest-URL: https://reviews.apache.org/r/10366/ X-Sender: "Radhika PC" References: <20130410074237.13808.26791@reviews.apache.org> In-Reply-To: <20130410074237.13808.26791@reviews.apache.org> Reply-To: "Radhika PC" --===============2581702084412887977== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable > On April 10, 2013, 7:42 a.m., Sateesh Chodapuneedi wrote: > > Section 8.3.7.5 Removing Nexus Virtual Switch is specifying steps to de= lete VMware dvSwitch. This is not correct. There is no notion of deletion o= f VMware dvSwitch (please refer to FS for the feature) in CloudStack. Pleas= e remove section completely. > > In page 109, replace 'configuring' by 'orchestration of in the line "C= loudStack supports configuring virtual networks in a deployment with...." > > In page 110, against the table entry "vCenter Host" - description shoul= d be vCenter host/ip. Presence of Nexus virtual switch is irrelevant for th= e vCenter here. > > In page 110, against the table entry "Guest Traffic vSwitch Name" - des= cription should be "Name of virtual switch to be used for guest traffic" > > In page 110, against the table entry "Public Traffic vSwitch Name" - de= scription should be "Name of virtual switch to be used for public traffic" > > In page 109, use Distributed Virtual Switch instead of "Virtual Distrib= uted Switch" > > In page 109, instead of 'Nexus 1000v Virtual Switch' better to write 'N= exus 1000v Distributed Virtual Switch' > > Add cluster parameters documented in page 62, is fine, reviewed. > > As mentioned in FS, pre-requisites is to pre-provision dvSwitch in data= center that is containing cluster being managed by cloudstack. > > = > > > = > Radhika PC wrote: > Is pre-provisioning the dvSwitch in the datacenter is the only prereq= uisite? do we have to note down any parameters, that could be later used in= CloudStack ? Please confirm. > = > Radhika PC wrote: > The FS listed the following: > = > CloudStack does following, > Create dvPortGroup over designated dvSwitch - How ? = > Modify dvPortGroup over designated dvSwitch -How? > Delete dvPortGroup over designated dvSwitch - How ? Is deleting/creat= ing/modifying dvPortGroup similar to deleting dvSwitch ? Could you please c= larify. > = > Radhika PC wrote: > FS states: > = > Deployment requirements (fresh install vs. upgrade) if any > = > VMware dvSwitch must be already created/configured in the vCenter dat= acenter deployment (understood!) > = > All the host/cluster resources should be added to dvSwitch before add= ing the cluster to CloudStack's pod cluster. (it is not clear this step nee= d to be done on vCenter or CloudStack). It is very difficult to document su= ch a complex feature without a setup. > = > Radhika PC wrote: > FS states: > = > Explain performance & scalability implications when feature is used f= rom small scale to large scale > In case of vSphere 4.1 dvPortGroup need to be created with specific n= umber of dvPorts. In large scale deployment optimum use of dvPorts may not = be possible due to this pre-allocation. In case of vSphere 5.0 the autoexpa= nd feature helps in auto increment of number of dvPorts. (what is the speci= fic number here ?) > = > Network switches (including the vSwitch in ESXi host) keep a distinct= forwarding table for each VLAN; this could lead to an increased overhead i= n packet forwarding when a considerable number of isolated networks, each o= ne with a significant number of virtual machines, is configured in a data c= enter. (Is this a limitation? should it be mentioned?) please clarify > = > Radhika PC wrote: > The comments states: > = > In page 110, against the table entry "Guest Traffic vSwitch Name" - d= escription should be "Name of virtual switch to be used for guest traffic" > In page 110, against the table entry "Public Traffic vSwitch Name" - = description should be "Name of virtual switch to be used for public traffic" > = > Question: From where do you pick up/ specify a name for the traffic ?= Is this something that we get from vCenter setup ? Or are we saying to men= tion what type of switch to be used ? Comment states: In page 109, use Distributed Virtual Switch instead of "Virtual Distributed= Switch" But in VMware terms it is "VMware vSphere Distributed Switch (VDS)" see se= e http://blogs.vmware.com/vsphere/tag/distributed-switch Shouldn't be we following similar terminology ? - Radhika ----------------------------------------------------------- This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: https://reviews.apache.org/r/10366/#review18935 ----------------------------------------------------------- On April 10, 2013, 7:05 a.m., Radhika PC wrote: > = > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/10366/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > = > (Updated April 10, 2013, 7:05 a.m.) > = > = > Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomec= hak, Pranav Saxena, Sateesh Chodapuneedi, and ilya musayev. > = > = > Description > ------- > = > Documentation on Distributed Switches: nexus and dvSwitch. > Prerequisites part of VMware dvSwitch is still unclear. Please provide ne= cessary suggestions. > = > = > This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-772. > = > = > Diffs > ----- > = > docs/en-US/Book_Info.xml c125ab8 = > docs/en-US/add-clusters-vsphere.xml 6b2dff2 = > docs/en-US/images/add-cluster.png 383f375ebedd62d9b294a56f777ed4b8c0d92= e10 = > docs/en-US/images/dvswitch-config.png PRE-CREATION = > docs/en-US/images/dvswitchconfig.png PRE-CREATION = > docs/en-US/vmware-cluster-config-dvswitch.xml PRE-CREATION = > docs/en-US/vmware-install.xml 467e135 = > = > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/10366/diff/ > = > = > Testing > ------- > = > Publican builds, patch applies. > = > = > Thanks, > = > Radhika PC > = > --===============2581702084412887977==--