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From "Joe Brockmeier" <...@zonker.net>
Subject Re: Review Request: Document procedure to choose default System Offering for System VMs
Date Tue, 08 Jan 2013 05:20:27 GMT

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Hi Radhika, 

Thanks for this, sorry it's taken so long to get to! 

A couple of things:

We should xref any pointers to content ("See Creating a New System Service Offering", for
example). 

MSSQL should probably be MySQL

Replace CloudStack with &PRODUCT; 

Should we give instructions or a pointer to instructions on how users should destroy existing
CPVM/SSVM offerings? As a side note, do we define the CPVM or SSVM acronyms anywhere? I don't
see any instances - and I'm not sure that CPVM/SSVM are entirely obvious acronyms. 

Thanks!

Joe 

- Joe Brockmeier


On Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Dec. 20, 2012, 6:08 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe
Brockmeier.
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> Description
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> doc for Document procedure to choose default System Offering for System VMs
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/offerings.xml 10252fd 
>   docs/en-US/sys-offering-sysvm.xml PRE-CREATION 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/8698/diff/
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> Testing
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> Build cleanly. 
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> publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-installation.cfg
> publican build --format=html --langs=en-US --config publican-adminguide.cfg
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> Patch applies.
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> Thanks,
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> Radhika PC
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