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Date: Fri, 19 Oct 2012 11:29:43 +0800
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Subject: Re: [Doc] Review and Testing request: All documents! Sign up for your
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From: Gavin Lee <gavin.lxh@gmail.com>
To: cloudstack-dev@incubator.apache.org
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Hi, Jessica
I saw a big part was missing for docbook: vmware vsphere hypervisor
installation.
I just signed and hopefully can provide it  early next week.

On Thu, Oct 18, 2012 at 4:30 AM, Jessica Tomechak
<jessica.tomechak@gmail.com> wrote:
> During IRC chat today, it was proposed that we review and use-test all
> documentation before releasing 4.0. I endorse this wholeheartedly, and
> would like to offer thanks in advance to anyone who gives a thorough
> reading and tries out the step-by-step procedures in our docs.
>
> Here is a signup sheet where we can divide up the task. Please sign up and
> take a look at "How to review" and "Where to get the docs" on this wiki
> page. Also, please feel free to add tasks to the wiki, or add to the
> reviewer's checklist with your own favorite doc flaws others should look
> for.
>
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Review+4.0+Documentation
>
> We need to look for two things especially:
>
> (1) Missing information. If there are extra steps needed, such as to
> manually install certain libraries that aren't included in the default
> build, we need to note that in the correct doc section.
>
> (2) Citrix and even Cloud.com cruft. For example, in the Developer's Guide,
> in the "Introduction for Developers" section, we have this:
>
> 2.2 API Reference:
> http://download.cloud.com/support/downloads.html/
>
> 3.0 API Reference:
> http://download.cloud.com/releases/3.0.0/api_3.0.0/TOC_Root_Admin.html/
>
> Jessica T.
> CloudStack Tech Pubs


-- 
Gavin