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From "David Nalley" <da...@gnsa.us>
Subject Re: Review Request: [DOCS]Docbook xml for section: Citrix XenServer Installation
Date Wed, 12 Sep 2012 06:47:57 GMT

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Hi Gavin, 

Thanks for the work, that looks much better - I did find a couple more issues when reading
over the text - one needs to be corrected I imagine, the other is up to you. 

There are several occurrences of CloudStack that should be &PRODUCT; 

The optional issue is that there are a number of references to old versions of CloudStack
(3.0.0, 3.0.2) that seem superfluous for a 4.0.0 install manual. 

--David

- David Nalley


On Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m., Gavin Lee wrote:
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> (Updated Sept. 12, 2012, 6:43 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley and Jessica Tomechak.
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> Description
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> Add docbook xml for Citrix Xenserver Installation.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/citrix-xenserver-installation.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/provisioning-steps.xml fda3e17 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/6917/diff/
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> Testing
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> Passed publican build and verified html/pdf outputs.
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> Thanks,
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> Gavin Lee
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