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Subject [24/50] [abbrv] git commit: updated refs/heads/4.2 to a23322b
Date Mon, 26 Aug 2013 23:33:00 GMT
edit changes across assorted files


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/commit/d4250802
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/tree/d4250802
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/diff/d4250802

Branch: refs/heads/4.2
Commit: d42508029809c16e6e576aa885d8c2109003bf14
Parents: 9f9f438
Author: Radhika PC <radhika.puthiyetath@citrix.com>
Authored: Fri Aug 23 15:58:33 2013 +0530
Committer: radhikap <radhika.puthiyetath@citrix.com>
Committed: Mon Aug 26 16:38:14 2013 +0530

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 docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml       |  6 +++---
 docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml |  2 +-
 docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml     | 12 +++++-------
 docs/en-US/pvlan.xml                   |  2 +-
 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
index 688ba34..a671329 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     <title>Adding a Network</title>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+        <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
     <title>Removing a Network</title>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+        <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
     <title>Selecting the Default Network</title>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+        <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
index 6c2b504..e6a018f 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   <title>Configuring a Shared Guest Network</title>
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para>
+      <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para>

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
index a1976da..193b916 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     extend the VLAN range.</para>
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+      <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>Ensure that the VLAN range does not already exist.</para>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
       <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure. </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone with which you want to work.</para>
+      <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone to which you want to work
with.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>Click Physical Network.</para>
@@ -50,15 +50,13 @@
             <imagedata fileref="./images/edit-icon.png"/>
           </imageobject>
           <textobject>
-            <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to add a VLAN range.</phrase>
+            <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to edit the VLAN range.</phrase>
           </textobject>
         </inlinemediaobject></para>
-      <para>The VLAN Ranges field now be editable.</para>
+      <para>The VLAN Ranges field now is editable.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Enter the start and end of the VLAN range. If you have multiple ranges,
separate them by
-        a comma.</para>
-      <para>For example: 200-210,300-350,500-600, 100-110</para>
+      <para>Specify the start and end of the VLAN range in comma-separated list.</para>
       <para>Specify all the VLANs you want to use, VLANs not specified will be removed
if you are
         adding new ranges to the existing list. </para>
     </listitem>

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
index f647d93..eb4c1d8 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
     <title>Creating a PVLAN-Enabled Guest Network</title>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para>
+        <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para>


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