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From "T Jake Luciani (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] [Updated] (CASSANDRA-10850) v4 spec has tons of grammatical mistakes
Date Mon, 21 Dec 2015 14:48:46 GMT

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T Jake Luciani updated CASSANDRA-10850:
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    Fix Version/s:     (was: 3.0.2)
                   3.0.3

> v4 spec has tons of grammatical mistakes
> ----------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: CASSANDRA-10850
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CASSANDRA-10850
>             Project: Cassandra
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation and Website
>            Reporter: Sandeep Tamhankar
>             Fix For: 3.0.3
>
>         Attachments: v4-protocol.patch
>
>
> https://github.com/apache/cassandra/blob/cassandra-3.0/doc/native_protocol_v4.spec
> I notice the following in the first section of the spec and then gave up:
> "The list of allowed opcode is defined Section 2.3" => "The list of allowed opcode*s*
is defined in Section 2.3"
> "the details of each corresponding message is described Section 4" => "the details
of each corresponding message are described in Section 4" since the subject is details, not
message.
> "Requests are those frame sent by" => "Requests are those frame*s* sent by"
> I think someone should go through the whole spec and fix all the mistakes rather than
me pointing out the ones I notice piece-meal. I found the grammar errors to be rather distracting.



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