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From shartzel <...@git.apache.org>
Subject [GitHub] incubator-brooklyn pull request: DO NOT MERGE - "Getting Started" ...
Date Mon, 21 Dec 2015 19:43:42 GMT
Github user shartzel commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-brooklyn/pull/1116#discussion_r48182606
  
    --- Diff: docs/guide/start/managing-cli.md ---
    @@ -0,0 +1,309 @@
    +---
    +title: Monitoring and Managing Applications
    +title_in_menu: Monitoring and Managing Applications
    +layout: website-normal
    +menu_parent: index-cli.md
    +children:
    +- { section: Applications } 
    +- { section: Entities } 
    +- { section: Sensors  } 
    +- { section: Effectors  } 
    +- { section: Activities } 
    +---
    +
    +
    +
    +So far we have touched on Brooklyn's ability to *deploy* an application blueprint to
a cloud provider, but this just 
    +the beginning. The sections below outline how to manage the application that has been
deployed.
    +
    +## Applications
    +
    +Having created the application we can query its status.  We can find a summary of all
deployed apps:
    +{% highlight bash %}
    +$ br app
    --- End diff --
    
    Nitpick: Here and following, inconsistent use of the short version of commands etc. (EG
"app" for "application"). I would say that the first use in any document should be the full
version, and subsequent uses may or should be shortened. 


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