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From "Berin Loritsch" <blorit...@apache.org>
Subject FW: Phoenix home page misspelling
Date Wed, 04 Sep 2002 20:47:27 GMT


> -----Original Message-----
> From: John Sumsion [mailto:jsumsion@januslogix.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, September 04, 2002 4:23 PM
> To: bloritsch@apache.org
> Subject: Phoenix home page misspelling
> 
> 
> The home page for Phoenix 
> (http://jakarta.apache.org/avalon/phoenix/index.html) reads:
> 
>  >> In the future it will conditionally offer ???
>  >> support ??? extra facilities such as
>  >> central server management, server
>  >> pools, and other facilities aimed at
>  >> reducing the time to market. The API
>  >> defines a standard method of piecing
>  >> togther ??? server components and
>  >> creating a server.
> 
> I think only one of "offer" or "support" should be used.  
> They both work 
> equally well in my view.  Also, togther is spelled together.  
> Thanks for a 
> great introduction to Phoenix, I'm still reading about the 
> exciting technology.
> 
> John...
> 


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