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Subject: [jira] [Updated] (IVY-1317) grammar rework on Features page
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     [ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/IVY-1317?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Dave Smith updated IVY-1317:
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    Attachment: features.html.patch

proposed patch file for the "sources/features.html" file.
                
> grammar rework on Features page
> -------------------------------
>
>                 Key: IVY-1317
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/IVY-1317
>             Project: Ivy
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>            Reporter: Dave Smith
>            Priority: Minor
>              Labels: patch
>         Attachments: features.html.patch
>
>   Original Estimate: 3h
>  Remaining Estimate: 3h
>
> Since the Home==>Features page is a likely first step for new visitors to http://ant.apache.org/ivy/, grammar and clarity should be improved for this page.  I spent a few hours in grammar rework for this page.  I attempted to do as little interpretation as possible (to avoid straying from intended meaning), but I did have to interpret meaning in several cases.

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