From notifications-return-16957-apmail-ant-notifications-archive=ant.apache.org@ant.apache.org Fri Sep 30 13:59:09 2011 Return-Path: X-Original-To: apmail-ant-notifications-archive@minotaur.apache.org Delivered-To: apmail-ant-notifications-archive@minotaur.apache.org Received: from mail.apache.org (hermes.apache.org [140.211.11.3]) by minotaur.apache.org (Postfix) with SMTP id A859270A6 for ; Fri, 30 Sep 2011 13:59:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 11522 invoked by uid 500); 30 Sep 2011 13:59:09 -0000 Delivered-To: apmail-ant-notifications-archive@ant.apache.org Received: (qmail 11482 invoked by uid 500); 30 Sep 2011 13:59:09 -0000 Mailing-List: contact notifications-help@ant.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: dev@ant.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list notifications@ant.apache.org Received: (qmail 11474 invoked by uid 99); 30 Sep 2011 13:59:09 -0000 Received: from nike.apache.org (HELO nike.apache.org) (192.87.106.230) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Fri, 30 Sep 2011 13:59:09 +0000 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=-2000.5 required=5.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED,RP_MATCHES_RCVD X-Spam-Check-By: apache.org Received: from [140.211.11.116] (HELO hel.zones.apache.org) (140.211.11.116) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Fri, 30 Sep 2011 13:59:07 +0000 Received: from hel.zones.apache.org (hel.zones.apache.org [140.211.11.116]) by hel.zones.apache.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 72A2B2A256E for ; Fri, 30 Sep 2011 13:58:45 +0000 (UTC) Date: Fri, 30 Sep 2011 13:58:45 +0000 (UTC) From: "Dave Smith (Created) (JIRA)" To: notifications@ant.apache.org Message-ID: <2063158863.11380.1317391125471.JavaMail.tomcat@hel.zones.apache.org> Subject: [jira] [Created] (IVY-1317) grammar rework on Features page MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-JIRA-FingerPrint: 30527f35849b9dde25b450d4833f0394 X-Virus-Checked: Checked by ClamAV on apache.org grammar rework on Features page ------------------------------- Key: IVY-1317 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/IVY-1317 Project: Ivy Issue Type: Improvement Components: Documentation Reporter: Dave Smith Priority: Minor Attachments: features.html.patch Since the Home==>Features page is a likely first step for new visitors to http://ant.apache.org/ivy/, grammar and clarity should be improved for this page. I spent a few hours in grammar rework for this page. I attempted to do as little interpretation as possible (to avoid straying from intended meaning), but I did have to interpret meaning in several cases. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. If you think it was sent incorrectly, please contact your JIRA administrators: https://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/ContactAdministrators!default.jspa For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira